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I lie in your arms,
Tender and focused,
Concentrating on your smile.
You hold my palms,
Keep me to your bust,
Procrastinating for a while.

I look into your eyes,
Search your features,
Contemplating your furrowed brow.
I listen to your sighs,
As you talk of futures,
Incarcerated in the here and now.

You pause to think,
Then you continue,
Addressing the all will never be.
I sit on the brink,
Staring at you,
Craving that you still wanted me.
©2004-2009 ~kickmeiamadog
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Full title : If you love me don’t set me free

Just played with a new structure i came up with, the title came before i wrote the poem.

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:iconspider-miss:
This is so beautiful... I love it!

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"When my face goes, my body goes. I'll be nothing."
:iconfreespirit26:
Damn good....really! :clap:
:iconkickmeiamadog:
Thankyou so much!!! :glomp:

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this is beautiful! i love how it flows so well, and the meaning behind it. great work dearie!
+Aithne

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:iconkickmeiamadog:
Thanks thanks thanks!!!!

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

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:iconkickmeiamadog:
Cheers my dear :D

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

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:iconaithneetain:
*nods*

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you're very welcome :glomp:

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"When my face goes, my body goes. I'll be nothing."
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dude, ur really good at love poems.

i was having one of these moments with my g/f just a lil while ago.
i gotta fav this


good job ;)

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~Love is such a beautiful and strange thing... We share joy; we share pain; but when i bleed, do u too?~
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