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If you love me by ~kickmeiamadog:iconkickmeiamadog:

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I lie in your arms,
Tender and focused,
Concentrating on your smile.
You hold my palms,
Keep me to your bust,
Procrastinating for a while.

I look into your eyes,
Search your features,
Contemplating your furrowed brow.
I listen to your sighs,
As you talk of futures,
Incarcerated in the here and now.

You pause to think,
Then you continue,
Addressing the all will never be.
I sit on the brink,
Staring at you,
Craving that you still wanted me.
©2004-2009 ~kickmeiamadog
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Submitted: August 3, 2004
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Full title : If you love me don’t set me free

Just played with a new structure i came up with, the title came before i wrote the poem.
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~spider-miss:iconspider-miss: Aug 3, 2004, 2:43:19 PM
This is so beautiful... I love it!

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"When my face goes, my body goes. I'll be nothing."
~Freespirit26:iconFreespirit26: Aug 3, 2004, 3:28:38 PM
Damn good....really! :clap:
~kickmeiamadog:iconkickmeiamadog: Aug 3, 2004, 3:29:45 PM
Thankyou so much!!! :glomp:

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~AithneEtain:iconAithneEtain: Aug 3, 2004, 3:46:01 PM
this is beautiful! i love how it flows so well, and the meaning behind it. great work dearie!
+Aithne

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~kickmeiamadog:iconkickmeiamadog: Aug 3, 2004, 3:46:09 PM
Thanks thanks thanks!!!!

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

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~kickmeiamadog:iconkickmeiamadog: Aug 3, 2004, 3:51:08 PM
Cheers my dear :D

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

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~AithneEtain:iconAithneEtain: Aug 3, 2004, 3:52:44 PM
*nods*

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tearing a new shadow that falls across my mind
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Check these peeps out
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~spider-miss:iconspider-miss: Aug 3, 2004, 4:50:34 PM
you're very welcome :glomp:

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"When my face goes, my body goes. I'll be nothing."
~Absence-Of-Lite:iconAbsence-Of-Lite: Aug 3, 2004, 4:53:19 PM
dude, ur really good at love poems.

i was having one of these moments with my g/f just a lil while ago.
i gotta fav this


good job ;)

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