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Adove the fields I dream by ~kickmeiamadog:iconkickmeiamadog:



Above the fields I dream and I despair,
My unruly perch has seen too much blood,
I sit and stare at a pool of dark mud;
I wish to cleanse myself of this affair.
A crow hovers near, a speck of black spite,
His long hate-filled stare permeates my shell,
And I live in fear of where I do dwell;
I do not believe I will be here tonight.
I drift in the wind, shaken by the dread
That fills my head with broken thoughts of men
Gorging on intense heartfelt cries of pain.
I fall and crumble, shattered and wide spread;
A mess of emotional death, “Chaplain?”,
“Sure they won’t put me together again?”
©2008-2009 ~kickmeiamadog
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:iconrach--86:
okay, first off, i love this! so well written. as for the story, well as i started reading i thought it was about a bird. then a snail. then a tree. then a scarecrow. and now i've got myself so confused i dont know!

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DRINK BEER!
:iconkickmeiamadog:
Lol, thank you :D

Well if you saw it originally it was called The Egg, does that give you a clue?

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

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:iconrach--86:
ah huh! its about an egg! lol. humpty!

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DRINK BEER!
:iconkickmeiamadog:
Hehe, yes it is old girl!

I read that he was actually a huge old cannon that fell from a tower, hence the battlefield atmosphere!

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

I am an adopter at :iconwriters:
:iconrach--86:
hey, ya know, you gotta quit with the 'old'! coz, y'know that makes you ancient...
a canon? cool....

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DRINK BEER!
:iconkickmeiamadog:
Lol, Well i can deal with that, i'm an ancient one, a wise old man who's still damned good looking XD

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

I am an adopter at :iconwriters:

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